以下是一篇小升初优秀英语小作文的例子：

My Teacher - Mr. Tan

Mr. Tan, our teacher, has a pair of elegant eyebrows, large eyes like precious stones, and long black hair. In the sunlight, he appears so beautiful and kind. Often, we are referred to as the flowers of the motherland, and the teacher as the辛勤gardener. Without the gardener’s cultivation, how could we appreciate the blooming moments? Mr. Tan tirelessly prepares us for upcoming lessons and corrects our assignments day and night, leaving no time for rest. I am a bit of a crybaby, and whenever I cry, Mr. Tan would comfort me, saying, “Don’t cry, you look much prettier when you’re not.” He would then share life’s simple yet profound truths with me: just as iron needs steel, each meal is essential; every tear means the previous meal was in vain. These plain words of Mr. Tan are deeply etched in my memory, making me forever grateful。

这篇作文以学生的视角描绘了对老师的感激之情，语言朴实动人，表达了对老师的敬爱和怀念。